Sunday, October 25, 2015

Min slowly walked to the Blood and Tech room and saw that Dave couldn't stay still on the bed he was strapped in; he kept twisting  and turning to get out.  There were wires and tubes connected to a computer and his brain; Min saw small, neon colored particles on the computer screen.
"What are those?," Min asked.
Winston's and Jo's eyes widened then looked at each other and said, "Um...  You don't really need to know."
'What do you mean?"
"I mean, it's not important," Jo replied.
"Just tell me!"
Winston rolled his eyes and said, "Those particles are a bacteria that makes your brain lose some memory and if you lose memory from that bacteria that the crow may have, then you'll want to attack everyone that you don't know."
Min couldn't understand what Winston said then replied, "The bird made him like this?"
"Maybe, but it can come from someone that already has it since he got here or the crow that pecked him in Door five."
" If it was someone, who do you think it was?"
"Jo's face lit up as if he knew who it was then said, " I'm pretty sure its Alan.  You know, the six foot kid that threw a stone at -"
A few seconds later, Dave's eyes turned red and yellow then screamed as if he had so much pain in his body; the windows started breaking, and the Blood and Tech room started to fall apart.
"Dave!  Stop screaming!," Winston yelled, "It's making it worse!"
"That's it.  Dave, we're sending you to Door four, where the fire and demons are," Jo said furiously.

Saturday, October 17, 2015

Chapter 2


Min woke up early in the morning. He saw Ray and another member sleeping on another bunk to his right- Ray on the top bunk, the other member on the bottom bunk- and to his left was Issac and Jo. He stepped outside and saw the numbered doors again. He ran to one of the doors as fast as he could in case anyone saw him.

He ran in front of Door 4; suddenly, when he was about to open the door a pale boy body slammed him and pinned him to the ground and said, “ Do you want to be killed?!” then started punching his chest until Issac shot the pale boy with an arrow. The pale boy let go of Min and screamed from the pain in his arm. Everyone woke up and gathered around them while Issac pointed a fifteen inch knife towards the pale boy's neck.

Two dark skinned boys pulled Min away and took him to Jo so that he could check on him.

“What are you doing?” asked Min.

“Dave punched you in the chest right? Can you breathe normally?” Jo asked.

“Um yeah. What's his problem?” asked Min

“We don't know. Winston and I need to check and go into his brain to see what's making him act this way 'cause Dave is never like this,” Jo replied

“Hey stupid, why were you even near Door four? There are flames and demons from hell in there,” Issac asked.

“Why can't I go in there? Why can't you tell me what 'The Unknown Trials' are?” Min asked desperately.

Ray rolled his eyes and replied, “ Just shut up. This place is like prison. There's no way out, even if we find the keys.”

Sunday, October 11, 2015

Cont'd III Chapter 1


“ So which leader is he gonna get Ray?,” a British Boy said

“Be patient you sick- faced freak,” Ray replied, “We need to know his name first.”

The 5'10'' Asian American kid said, “I'm Issac- Lee- Suzuki. I take care of the archers and sometimes the runners since the leader passed away, Ray Perry takes care of the knife throwers, Jo Gold takes care of the ones infected from the subcutaneous infected crows, Wesley Glass takes care of the Blood Rooms which are the numbered doors, and Winston Ty takes care of the technology in the Tech room.”

Min's heart started beating when he heard about the subcutaneous infected crows; one of the crows just flew passed him and Issac immediately shot the crow with his arrow- when it flew passed him, his eyes enlarged and felt like it was about to fall out of his eye sockets because of how disgusting it looked to him. The crow was three feet tall with the infection on its face.

“ My name is Min Park,” he whispered softly.

“ Huh? I can't hear your sick voice. Just. Say. Your. NAME!,” Issac said in an upsetting manner.

“ It's Min Park,” he said clearly but nervously.

“ Thank You,” Issac replied.

“Issac, why can't you just calm down for once?,” Jo said.

“Just shut your face Jo,” Issac replied.

Suddenly Ray, the leader, took a step forward. Him and everyone else wore the normal clothes- buttoned shirt, khaki pants, military boots, and their gear. The clothes looked better than he expected- he expected something that looked like one piece suits. They all had clean- shaven faces but none of them laughed, or cracked a smile once since he got there.

Issac walked into Ray's and Min's conversation with Winston and said, “Winston just saw Dave get pecked by a crow in number five.”

“Okay. I'll go get AJ to help me carry him to Jo,” Ray replied.

“Aye Issac,” Min said, “Can you tell me more about this place?”

“Really? Now? When I need to practice shooting?,” Min complained.

“I'm desperate,” Min said.

“Fine. Where you are is a place where no one wants to be. Every two to three months someone like you comes. The only reason why we're here is because we need to find the 'key' in each door, and once we find all of them we're out. And so far we found nothing,” the words that came out of Issac's mouth made fear take over Min's body.

Saturday, October 3, 2015

Cont'd II Chapter 1

 

He stood up and slowly rotated in a circle. His new companions stared and whispered; and some kicked his leg to see how he would react. Min felt dizzy, and his eyes started flickering because of the strange, bright place he ended up in.

“Aye, stop that,” Min said.

“Yeah don't kick the lil' bug,” a deep voice said.

A 5'10'' Asian- American kid with well done hair and thick biceps crossed his arms and gave him a disgusted look as he examined him. A blonde six foot teenager threw a large stone at the back of his head and said, “I've seen you somewhere. Are you sure that you don't work with Randall and Andrea?”

“Um, I don't... really... think... so,” Min replied.

“Huh. I really feel like you do. You better not lie; they're the ones who put us in this mess.”

“Shut your face Jo!” a dark haired boy yelled, “One more time you pick on someone, you'll stay in Door number four!”

He's probably the leader...or protector, he thought to himself. Hating how everyone gazed at him, he started to walk towards the door that says 'Door 1.'  A dark skinned boy then pushed him two yards back and said, “Don't go there.”

“What is this place? Is it like... prison?” Min asked.

“No one's gonna answer your question you noob,” Ray answered.

He looked up in confusion; the sky looked artificial- blue sky and hardly any clouds. The grass was green, but to his left, he saw doors numbered from one to five. There were a few trees draping over the doors, the roots looked like gnarled witches' hands digging into the dirt. To his right was a stone wall with all their names; some of the names were crossed out and near it had the words 'Rest In Peace.'- he assumed that they have already past away. Then, below all the names had the names, 'Ray Perry,' 'Jo Gold,' 'Issac- Lee- Suzuki,' 'Wesley Glass,' and 'Winston Ty.' They were all under 'Leaders'- whatever that meant to him.

He didn't know what that meant. He didn't know that any of this meant. He suddenly woke up in a metal cage, ended up in a field with numbered doors, and couldn't remember anything.

He just couldn't understand what he did to be there.