Saturday, September 26, 2015

Cont'd Chapter 1


He backed into the corner of the cage again and sat in a fetal position and started shivering. He started sobbing from fear and frustration; his heart started beating as if there was a demon in his chest that wanted to jump out of his body and eat him alive.

For some strange reason, he screamed, “There's a demon trying to eat me alive! Someone... help me!”; when he screamed, it felt like his throat was tearing apart.

He could feel himself getting closer to the location.

A loud sound from the metals banging each other scared him, making him twitch and gasp as he looked up. When he looked up, he started to see the ceiling opening, and Min started to get blinded from the bright light. He quickly looked away, then covered his face with both hands.

He heard male voices which made fear take over his body.

“Hey, what's your name?”

“You smell like a dude's locker room.”

“It looks like a piece of dirt.”

“Aye, be nice to the lil' newbie.”

Min was so confused and started to panic again. The voices he heard sounded foreign yet so familiar. He slowly turned around to see. He squinted his eyes and tried to adjust to the bright light. He fell back and panicked when he saw a group of twenty- three boys that seemed like they were his age.

Slowly, like a camera focusing, he could finally see their faces clearly. Since they were only young teenage boys, he started to feel less scared, which made it calm his racing heart.

A heavily muscled Australian kid jumped into the cage and grabbed Min by his clothes and threw him out of the cage. Then the Australian kid said something that made him gape his mouth, “I'm Ray, and welcome to 'The Unknown Trials'.”

2 comments:

  1. I really liked the description and suspense of your story. Great piece of writing!

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